Here are links to pages that contain what i've written. The outline states about 30 chapters, but i've not gotten that far in writing as of yet. The storyline has been solidifying in my head over the past few years, and i struggle mostly with dialogue when writing. i've found that writing in the first perspective is much more difficult than it seemed at first, but there are a couple of things i've found that seem to help me. the Prologue has been revised, and its the most polished piece that i've written. The first chapter is more in the rough draft stage, as i've only given it one good read over. the second chapter here is just the opening flashback, becuase the intensive dialogue in the next chapter is so important to get the reader/audience hooked that i've been taking it very slow. when i begin working on the script again i will post my progress, but the short i have for this class is taking a higher priority than just writing at the moment. i should set up a schedule where i write daily again, but there just isn't enough hours in the day. well, enough of my rambling, read it if you want to.